雅思小作文完美长句打造
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雅思小作文完美长句打造

来源:学历教育在线  2017-03-09  责任编辑:李老师

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如何在雅思写作中写出漂亮的长句一直是广大考生关心的问题,本文描述的是如何通过七个步骤,将一个只有主谓结构的简单句变成一个漂亮的复杂句,相信一定会对正在备考雅思考试写作的同学们有所帮助。

一、大家先写出一个简单句,只有主谓结构,即Basic Fact(subject+verb)

The number of Japanese tourists who travelled abroad increased.

二、添加数词Numbers

The number of Japanese tourists who travelled abroad increased from 5 million to 15 million.

三、什么时间?When?

The number of Japanese tourists who travelled abroad increased from 5 million to 15 million between 1985 and 1995.

四、数字是准确的吗?Exactly this number?

The number of Japanese tourists who travelled abroad increased from just under 5 million to around 15 million between 1985 and 1995.

五、添加一个副词Add an adverb

The number of Japanese tourists who travelled abroad increased dramatically from just under 5 million to around 15 million between 1985 and 1995.

六、以名词结构复述Rephrase with a noun

The number of Japanese tourists who travelled abroad increased dramatically from just under 5 million to around 15 million between 1985 and 1995,a rise of about 10 million in 10 years.

现在我们有了一个33个单词的漂亮的长句子~NOW WE HAVE A 33 WORDS,GOOD LONG SENTENCE~

七、现在我们尝试以名词开头来重写这个句子。Can we begin with a noun?

The number of Japanese tourists who travelled abroad increased dramatically from just under 5 million to around 15 million between 1985 and 1995,a rise of about 10 million in 10 years.

改写成:

There was a dramatic increase in the number of Japanese tourists who travelled abroad from just under 5 million to around 15 million between 1985 and 1995,a rise of about 10 million in 10 years.

现在已经37个单词啦!37 words now!我不建议写得更长了,it’s a nice long sentence~

总结:

写长句子时常用的7个步骤Here are the 7 steps we used:

1.Basic Fact

2.Number

3.When?

4.Exactly this number?

5.Add an adverb

6.Rephrase with a noun

7.Can we begin with a noun?

以上就是手把手7步走教你在雅思小作文中写出完美长句的全部内容,大家都get到了吗?祝各位考生都能考出理想的分数!

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